Open Poetry #43 |
Two's |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
It was two's when two met, when two eyes gazed upon the blue of a passionate thought. Two's when hearts momentarily thumped and minds lightly bumped in the night skies. Just twos, when a friendship grew and left each to the destiny of one's...as twos continued on, drifting onward in search of ones. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"when hearts momentarily thumped and minds lightly bumped in the night skies. Just twos, when a friendship grew and left each to the destiny of one's" very much enjoyed this |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lovely thoughts, dear Barry. I think we always long for "one" who becomes the one half of "two", but together makes "ONE". Love and joy. Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
And Double the Applause Magnus! ARCTIC WIND |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Kool write, me friend... j. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ You so please me with your poetic thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
You will never see a Warm Fuzzy's face, Because a Warm Fuzzy is TWO Fuzzites in Embrace! Many warm Fuzzies 2 go with this Poem. 2day you 1 the prize with this. I have no doubt that 2morrow will be gr8 4 you 2. Count on it! Sherry |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice buildup and seque into the one from 2 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Magnanimous One, now I know what you have been doing in your absence! ~ Learning to count! lol Cute write. 2 B or not 2 B, Big smile, Linda |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Seems that finding that perfect soulmate is an endless search. I enjoyed you thoughts on this one. ----------------------------------------------- Just twos, when a friendship grew and left each to the destiny of one's...as twos continued on, drifting onward in search of ones. ---------------------------------------------- |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very interesting play on words, Excellent write. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I admire the bravery of those who continue the search. Excellent write, my friend! *S* |
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