Open Poetry #43 |
Bitter Kiss |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Into the grey we digress shed of the neon of color and the peripheral black to confine us we drift like corks on wild waters struggling for destiny and heart's validation of that kiss left to die on the breeze of last summer and i wish i could daydream and smile with your eyes in my mirror of memoirs [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-01-2008 08:59 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Soft melancholic poetic breeze. So beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky... you do bottles so well makes me thirst for more |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent... You did well..very well! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
struggling for destiny and heart's validation of that kiss left to die on the breeze of last summer Don't we all have such a bittersweet memory like this... you cut like a knife, IG. Indigo |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
awesome, as always violence may not be the answer, but it does make good headway |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"..heart's validation" that. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"struggling for destiny and heart's validation of that kiss left to die on the breeze of last summer" So well said. Yes, I've been there, done that! Enjoyed! Helen |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."like corks on wild waters"... Brilliant! ;0 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"we drift like corks on wild waters struggling for destiny" ~ It is lines like these that keep me wanting to read more and more of your uniquely gorgeous poetry!!! Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks everyone for stopping by always appreciated |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed, Inkgoddess. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know that wish... as painful as wistful. *S* Great write! |
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