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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2008-08-08 10:18 PM



gentle prince
did you hear
my call?
bekoning you
from the other
side of the wall?
or was it the whispers
that spoke so sweetly
to you in your slumber
and made you wonder
once again
how real love
must feel......

~~~kingsangel~~~

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-08-08 10:52 PM


Yo dear Angel4aKing,

I'm listening.  I hear the call.

This is a fine little poem.

Love Bobby

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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2 posted 2008-08-08 10:56 PM


Thank you glad you liked it my prince!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-08-09 02:20 PM


Lovely Write!


ARCTIC WIND

Angel4aKing
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4 posted 2008-08-10 12:13 PM


Thank you for stopping by I am glad you liked it!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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5 posted 2010-10-06 07:53 AM


I think it must be the whispers.  They are far more seductive.
Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2010-10-07 01:55 PM


"that spoke so sweetly
to you in your slumber
and made you wonder
once again
how real love
must feel......"

must have been enticing whispers...

enjoyed this ma'am

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