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Open Poetry #43

True Love Waiting

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2008-08-08 08:14 PM

By 1:20 am you would think
My little body would be longing for sleep
But I am too cold
On the inside

My soul
Longs to be held
By another soul
One that loves ME
And all which that entails
Knowing sincere reciprocation
Liking me for my qualities, however few
Loving me for my defects, however numerous

But I can only imagine warmth
This cold is ever present
And I can only hope that venting
To more cold and more loneliness
Will help me sleep

By 1:30 am you would think
My little body would be longing for sleep
But I am too busy
Loving that other soul
Yet unbeknownst to me
For all he is and isn’t

MOCindy
Member

since 2008-07-30

Posts 73

1 posted 2008-08-08 08:46 PM

Very good. Sad! And I love the ending S.
C

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-08-08 10:57 PM

Yo dear pen&paper,

I really like this poem, and you.

Thanks for the great read.

Love Bobby

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