Open Poetry #43 |
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In Sacred Succession |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In Sacred Succession Past, through the walls of blue waterfalls By the footbridge in audible moan Channels sequence; spending mosaic calls Highs and lows take on colors and tone Glee faithfully; weather here, whether there Apart beats two hearts so in tune Such a soft rippled dance of the wind unaware Hoping time doubts its watch oh so soon Then again, to begin on a journey still pink Each reflection progressive and deep Walking on water, into bliss shadows sink As each sacred succession might keep By my eye, passes by, floats of delicate prayer With the life force of love powered on By the banks moist and moss, natures carpet and care All a part of each fair day to dawn Copyright Kkh 8/8/08 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you take my breath with words of beautiful mind places as i enter your pages |
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Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti Junior Member
since 2006-07-04
Posts 24germany |
Nice, I enjoyed the rythm Everyday I see a sunrise is a blessing, Every night I see the moon rise is a miracle. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Beautiful thoughts as always masterfully expressed, dear Kathleen. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful thoughts indeed! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You, my friend...have such a way with words. Always make me sit in awe, saying IWIHWT.. over and over again... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'Such a soft rippled dance of the wind unaware' You make the rippled words dance for us~ Lovely, lovely~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Feelings tied in with nature and of course water always will find a way of capturing my attention and the fact that you write so well doesn't hurt a bit either. Nicely done Kathleen. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Past, through the walls of blue waterfalls By the footbridge in audible moan ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ To me, those couple lines set the mood perfectly. You have such a beautiful mind and your poetry is in a class by itself. It is a wonderful gift you share here, Kathleen~ |
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