Open Poetry #43 |
Norma |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Cooper had a woman now-- the news was such event. "No Good Jim" had found a girl and became a gentleman. She didn't even hit five feet. She made even me feel tall. She was cautious entering and looked at us appalled. Then I offered her a beer as she perused my books displayed I asked if she would like a glass as she looked at me amazed. Then she told me she was "witch". I just smiled and said "I know." She eased, relaxed comraderie, and said, "I feel at home." I nodded in the understand-- sometimes I just feel the vibe-- know my people before greet, another one from the lost tribe. Then the ale loosened the tongue and she said she knew my home "Everything that you have here-- it's all the things I own." I confessed to her my fear "just who would Jim ask me to meet?" She laughed, the little leprechaun, confessing that she was relieved. "I never know what I might meet, Jim's friends are kind of strange." I told her that she could relax-- it was true I was deranged. But "what you see is just what is" Cooper beamed at us with pride. "I told her she would fall in love!" We both told him to be quiet. She told me tales of her life spent, how the night that she'd met Jim, She was dancing with a snake in voudoin ritual for the camera tourists tout in the spanish plaza-- I had noticed her accent and asked her where her youth was spent and then she broke in fairy laugh-- she was a witch from Salem, Mass. She reads the cards on Bourban Street behind a curtain made of beads. She told me how she hated it, how hard it was to read All the drunks who stumbled in and laughed at her as though she was a carney in some side show cage and then she stopped in sober pause, stating that they may be right-- this is not the way, yanno. I took her hand and held it tight and told her, YES, I know. She smiled at me and asked me then, "Is it all right if I come back?" I laughed and said, "Just pick me up?" We'll leave the guys across the tracks. Jim just beamed again at us, "I knew you two would hit it off..." Norma looked at me and grinned-- her hard blue eyes had melted soft. "Let's do this again, REAL SOON." She wrote her number on my hand... * * * * * |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Serenity Blaze. This is pretty good. In the strophe: "She told me tales of her life spent, how the night that she'd met Jim, She was dancing with a snake in voudoin ritual for the camera tourists tout in the spanish plaza--" should that be "tout" after tourists? Is that Norma's way of saying "out". Bobby |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Bobby? I'm trying to be very patient here. tout should that be "tout" after tourists? Is that Norma's way of saying "out".? Now I'm gonna ask you what that means, and you'll reply, honestly, right? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
she comes off the page and jumps into my head where i know her because of you youve done her well, her in her piercing stare |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Serenity Blaze, Thanks for being patient with this dumb city boy. I looked it up in the dictionary. Sorry to bother you. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
As I read this poem, I thought, "What a fascinating woman." - and I thought of two friends of mine. We seemed to be destined to be friends. When we met, we knew that we didn't share everything in common, but we shared a spirit. We share something deep inside. That is what I thought of when I read this poem. A |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...Mysteriously good. I am always currious about the unknown. Bobby you better watch out she might put a spell on you, Felix and your whole clan of characters...LOL...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
her eyes are mesmerizing... I'm so glad you took the photo... it only heightens the mystique. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with Sunshine!-- Thanks for adding the photo... Enjoyed the Good Read Serenity! ARCTIC WIND |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh goody I love these stories. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I'm smiling huge at this exchange between the two of you... "relaxed comraderie" indeed... thanks for inviting us in to watch/listen... and for introducing us to Norma... love ya, lady... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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