Open Poetry #43 |
sand dollars and wooden nickels |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pieces of me I wonder of the horse time when you were a suntan riding in my mind and my nights were the nudity that boys dream without reasons until they are men again and still wander their thoughts now you are velvet between stones as you drift your days often missing the sensual sounds of your own music but wearing glass eyes instead and touching with my hands the hard earth of your shore pressing it into the names of my wanting to know your whispers __________________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
perfect for this summer's morn~~ M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs, thanks babe |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
lovely... simply lovely i wonder what those whispers may be... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D This is beautiful. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your beautiful mind, as you reveal pieces of it through your poetry, stirs the explorer instincts. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Moonkist. Thanks to you foer the touch ______ Ms ali-san thank you lil one. ------- Ms mar, thanks for exploring my mind ms |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
now you are velvet between stones as you drift your days often missing the sensual sounds of your own music ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ There are always precious little slivers that sparkle in your poetry, DS. Like sand dollars and a suntan riding your mind~ Yea~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
of my wanting to know your whispers mmm... Mr Daark, I think your whispers would be very sweet to hear.. lovely gifting... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy..you make me wanna with your comments, thanks babe _______________ ms r&b, oh you are such a sweet tease, thanks ms |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
your light horse becomes a midnight ride for me... bless you... and your words |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, you make me smile more each time I read you,, thanks lady friend |
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