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Open Poetry #43

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Elias Nevermore
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since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2008-07-15 01:01 AM

I still can remember that day
I cried so hard my tears ran dry
for in my arms I held you
for the very last time

You left this world that day
you ascended to the stars
leaving behind broken memories
and an shattered loveless heart

I have been tormented inside
since that dreadful day you died.
Now how shall I move on
when all that I loved in life is gone.

Something in me just longs to be with you
my heart is troubled with memories,
memories that I only want to forget,
for every second I dwell upon you, my life is spent.

I realize now that I can't forget you.
Your love still has its hold on me.
A hold that I truly never want to ease.
I'm calling out to you, please be mine again.

I can feel your spirit surrounding me
silently calling out my name
waiting for me to be with you once again
to come be with you in heaven some day.

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All

fmlbarebackrider2001
Member

since 2005-11-16

Posts 138
West Texas, United States

1 posted 2008-07-15 01:26 AM

omg This hit too close to home. My bf passed away last month and you put into words just how I have felt at times. Very nice.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

2 posted 2008-07-15 11:11 PM

I''m glad that you could identify with the feelings expressed in the poem. I'm deeply sorry that you lost your boyfriend. Sadly everyone lose love in life,and we all wish that we could see them again.

-Elias

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