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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-08-08 06:14 AM



I will know your voice today
like the dawning of mornings
pressing breast warmth to windows
and feeding the child of my eyes
the milk moments of another day

you will bring the laughter bows
and tie them on tree limb arms
and around the faucets of grass
dipped in dew dreamer's whiskey
that march their uneven processions

and go nowhere in their best hurrys
just to be there when you are
and look back at your arrival
like my mind's eye will always
even when you are closer than sound

and we are both wearing speechless eyes
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-08-08 06:18 AM


this speaks to me Mr Daark... as I'm sure it speaks to many.... thank you... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine
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2 posted 2008-08-08 08:57 AM



The archer in me enjoyed this...
even if your bows weren't my bows.



Thank you, Sir, for my Friday smile.


Indigo
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3 posted 2008-08-08 11:15 AM


embedded within
our california dreaming
cool linen touches.

Sounds like a great place to be on a hot day...

Indigo  

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-08-08 11:56 AM


Ms r/b thanks for the sweet comments

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Ms sun thank you so much for the touch


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Ms indi so a love poem makes you dream or wake?  Thanks babe

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-08-09 11:13 AM


Enjoyed the write!


ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-08-09 12:02 PM


quote:
and look back at your arrival
like my mind's eye will always
even when you are closer than sound

and we are both wearing speechless eyes



A magical eye touch, where synchronicity of feelings reveal without a sound and still play the most romantic of tunes ... within the hearts.

Love your soft side, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-08-09 01:18 PM


a/w thanks so much


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ms mar, thanks lady for the eyes and smiles

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8 posted 2008-08-10 08:59 PM


The best conversations are the ones without sunglasses.

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-08-11 06:01 AM


ms ali-san...even the ones without words are so sensual sometimes, thanks ms
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