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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the interweaving of fingers seems how we lace ourselves together in the mind gloves of our love songs you wiggle your foot up and down there and say damn you for my knowing but you don't see my hands or know why I type so fast instead of the other things I know you imagine me doing with words and sounds and wants that can't fit into the envelopes between the lines of a poem without sticking out in places _________________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"with words and sounds and wants that can't fit into the envelopes between the lines of a poem without sticking out in places" love it D  |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Deliciously sensuous and full of self-knowing. Your X factor is showing! *grin. A fabulous poem. with smiles Lynda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
with words and sounds and wants that can't fit into the envelopes between the lines of a poem without sticking out in places........." I love this ending!-- Enjoyed you're poem  ARCTIC WIND |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's some love letter, Mister~ Now everyone take a number as to who gets to lick the envelope. *wink* hugs and stuff~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm yes.... Mr Daark, you weave magic wherever you go  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks lady for the smile sides _______________ ms lynda, thanks so much for touching this one _________________ a&w, thank you for the moments here ___________________ ms bluezy, thanks babe, but there is never a line... ________________ ms r&b thanks lady for the sweet words |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, I could listen to music like this all day long (and all night too). A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you babe |
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