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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-08-06 08:23 AM

As the leaves
flood the waters
the lonesome duck feather
the m&m peanuts

reminders,
first sonnets

and the multiple
grey goose
shots in the o.j.,
in the
'lets get her drunk'
and shorten
her skirt seams

Yes,
I want you
to think of me

my legs
in a cha cha
my heart
in a rumba

when the trees
miss their sparrows
and the past grieves
tomorrow

I want you
to think
of me

when I'm lost
in our moment

out at sea,
rolling.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-08-2008 07:53 AM).]

cauchy3
Member

since 2008-06-10

Posts 61

1 posted 2008-08-06 08:38 AM

I need the Oj and i think about girls

cauchy3
Member

since 2008-06-10

Posts 61

2 posted 2008-08-06 08:39 AM

Why shot in Oj . They are soft drinks nt drugs

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-08-06 10:39 AM

"Yes
I want you
to think of me

my legs
in a cha cha
my heart
in a rumba"

~ and what lovely thoughts they'd be!

Linda

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2008-08-06 07:55 PM

"when the trees
miss their sparrows
the past grieves
tomorrow

I want you
to think
of me"

My god, but you're lovely. So fine in leather, luscious in lace, and just as much mystery when you are bare...

Beautiful, mish!

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

5 posted 2008-08-06 07:58 PM

.

Good

.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-08-06 10:33 PM

I want you
to think
of me

lost
in our
moment

on the sea,
rolling................................"

This is by far the best I have read by you! Excellent Write Ink!

ARCTIC WIND

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2008-08-07 09:39 PM

when the trees
miss their sparrows

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Oh baby I love your ways...and you know just how to write it,

with feeling~

MOCindy
Member

since 2008-07-30

Posts 73

8 posted 2008-08-08 12:10 PM

beautiful poem like a song
esp love
when the trees
miss their sparrows
and the past grieves
tomorrow

I want you
to think
of me

C

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2008-08-10 06:02 PM

I am so glad that I stopped to read. What a treat.

Alison

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2008-08-10 06:09 PM

...started to single out a couple of lines but kept picking others so finally --- the whole thing is just plain wonderful!!!

glad I opened it...

j.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2008-08-10 06:14 PM

"I want you
to think
of me

when I'm lost
in our moment"

this is perfection

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2008-08-12 01:45 AM

"when the trees
miss their sparrows
and the past grieves
tomorrow

I want you
to think
of me"

Simply beautiful...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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