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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-08-06 06:32 AM

you know I can't say those things
not here in the public of your eyes
where your mind sees all of me
not just the lips moving parts

but the hands too that pray
that dreams don't end too soon
as long as you can stand a bit more
and don't mind the afterglow

that you say is consuming you quickly
like quicksand that you have jumped into
and you ask me to help you escape
to give you my hand and pull you free

but then you laugh at my expression
and see that I am already in deeper
since I am taller than you
and jumped just a second before you

into the wanting to want to, always
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daark

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-08-06 11:16 AM

ahhha D

this makes me smile

Fade
Junior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 38
on a (temporall) plane

2 posted 2008-08-06 11:18 AM

nice write.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-08-06 12:57 PM

Ms suesea. Thank you babe

__________

Fade thank you

Spuddette
Member

since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

4 posted 2008-08-06 03:47 PM

I really love this. Wow D. xxxjanetxxx

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

5 posted 2008-08-07 02:59 AM

in the water's rush
we lie submerged, our breathing
stilled by turbid dreams.

Mmmm... kinda like swimming with the dolphins.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2008-08-07 06:00 AM

ms indi...if I write you love poems
will you hate them...thanks babe

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-08-10 01:32 PM

Now, that's some jumping, dear D.! Freedom isn't an option when there is Love.

Awesome.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-08-10 03:10 PM

ms mar, thanks babe!!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2008-08-11 01:16 AM

You know, D, when I close my eyes, I see your poetry. You wrote beautiful on this one. Hip boots are a necessity in my life.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2008-08-11 06:01 AM

ms ali-san...or barefoot, thanks babe for looking in here

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2008-08-11 08:51 AM

ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2008-08-11 09:42 AM

A/w thank you so much my friend

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