Open Poetry #43 |
reverse two and a half with a twist |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you know I can't say those things not here in the public of your eyes where your mind sees all of me not just the lips moving parts but the hands too that pray that dreams don't end too soon as long as you can stand a bit more and don't mind the afterglow that you say is consuming you quickly like quicksand that you have jumped into and you ask me to help you escape to give you my hand and pull you free but then you laugh at my expression and see that I am already in deeper since I am taller than you and jumped just a second before you into the wanting to want to, always _________________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhha D this makes me smile |
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Fade Junior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 38on a (temporall) plane |
nice write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suesea. Thank you babe __________ Fade thank you |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
I really love this. Wow D. xxxjanetxxx |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
in the water's rush we lie submerged, our breathing stilled by turbid dreams. Mmmm... kinda like swimming with the dolphins. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...if I write you love poems will you hate them...thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Now, that's some jumping, dear D.! Freedom isn't an option when there is Love. Awesome. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks babe!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, D, when I close my eyes, I see your poetry. You wrote beautiful on this one. Hip boots are a necessity in my life. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...or barefoot, thanks babe for looking in here |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
A/w thank you so much my friend |
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