This night, is a perfect shade.

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Open Poetry #43

This night, is a perfect shade.

PrestonThePoet
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 87

0 posted 2008-08-04 12:54 PM

The sun dips beneath the horizon.
Each cloud within a sea of orange and scarlett.
I sit, here with you.
Absorbing each color, every sound.
Drowning in my feelings.
Choking for air,
My breath being stolen.
By those baby blues.
Your teeth glisten with warmth.
Wiping my dull expression.
Into a tiny smirk.
Our hearts, beating as one.
Sliding my hand into yours.
This moment couldn't be any more gratifying.
This night,
This night is a perfect shade of love.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2008-08-04 01:00 AM

Very romantic, Preston. Nice writing.
Ida

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2008-08-04 05:40 AM

YOUR POEM IS A PERFECT POEM!

LOVE IT!

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