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Child of The Invisible Known
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Child of The Invisible Known |
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Veni Mortem Junior Member
since 2008-07-31
Posts 43 |
Latent gravitation Something seems it’s in rotation Yet I find myself alone, Standing still Omnipresent visitation Cursing graveside limitation Still, I find myself alone, Standing still Constant friction, time is ticking Feels as if the world’s exploded Flowing motion, now it’s tricking All my thoughts, my mind’s eroded Fields of sin and shattered skin Wounds have opened up again Let me fall into the constant stream of blood All I’ve lost and all I’ve reached All I’ve healed and all I’ve breached Now I see that withdrawal will do no good I think there’s something there I can smell it in the air But I find myself alone, Standing still Though my sky is radiant All my thoughts are gradient I can’t help but feel alone, Standing still While you’re striving for redemption Heart and mind are in decay And you’re blinded by your emption Of another fee to pay And I see that these distractions Only patch my soul by fractions All I feel is that I want to crawl away Confidence is but a dream world To a hopeless little shell hurled Now into a world of crustacea deities In decay, shun indication Free gyration levitation Evacuate my confrontation Try to hide my situation Should I die now, should I die? Should I die now, should I die? How can I survive In a behemoth’s world While I’m in this homuncular form? And I know there’s something there I can feel it all around me But I find myself alone, Standing still |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am startled again by yet another line of yours today: "Fields of sin and shattered skin Wounds have opened up again Let me fall into the constant stream of blood" (I share spare the indelicate details)  *shaking my head* I've been missing out, apparently. You do go deep...my my. (and I'm resisting the urge for yet another bad joke of mine) My bad jokes are a very bad habit. Enjoyed.  |
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Veni Mortem Junior Member
since 2008-07-31
Posts 43 |
serenity- Thank you, thank you. ^_^ I'm glad it was enjoyed. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I peeked at your deviantart stuff too. Much enjoyed that as well, and I've been giving that stuff a try m'self. And lawsy, you could be kin... I have a story somewhere about an anime' convention I attended with my kids--"Mom" nearly got arrested!  *shaking my head* Watch it--I collect young'ns. *chuckle* |
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Veni Mortem Junior Member
since 2008-07-31
Posts 43 |
Oh, thank you for visiting! ^^ Lol, I'll have to hear that story sometime. ^_^ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Here ya go! /pip/Forum29/HTML/001822.html And I wince at the generalizations of the teens...forgive me for that, I was new to the realm of raising teens, m'self. I love my kids (now 17 & 18) and your artwork reminds me very much of my daughter's as well. But just as you stated on your own deviantart site, she also finds that classic anime' characters has limited her audience a bit, so she's expanded (I think). I only see the occasional acerbic lampoons--dead-on-balls accurate--sometimes at my expense to my dismay.  (and btw, yes, yer Dad pointed you out to me, but if I wasn't genuinely intrigued--you'd know.) I appreciate your humor, talent and insight very much, and Your Clocktower is driving me slightly batty--as it brought up memories of an old story I loved--the title of which is just on the tip of my tongue... You've got some very thoughtful insights going on, and allusions to so many classics it makes my head light up like a pinball machine.  So read the story, but forgive my ancient point of view, k? But I really did have a blast at that show! |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Uh... wow. I haven't read any of your writing before this, and now I see I have sorely missed out. Back I go to correct the error of my ways. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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Veni Mortem Junior Member
since 2008-07-31
Posts 43 |
serenity- Lol, quite a story you have there! ^_^ Sounds like it was fun. I've never heard of the band "Casimo" though; I'm ashamed of myself. >.< *nods* I'm exploring other styles, but anime will always have a place in my heart! |
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