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Night Moves
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Night Moves |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada 
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Night Moves Overhead night shot lights charge among clouds invisible above quarrels and storms a bruised and battered night becomes a fear divisible by morning's mediation the gentling recreation trick of mind and matter winsome moment after a winless fight Beneath. My poetry got lost in the dust of the bits and bytes of the new upload. Doing a search for 'Gaelynsgirl' will reveal all. with smiles... Lynda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly lyrical! Eric |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
A special comment coming from you... thank you Eric. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Almost goosebumps, I FEEL this one. Extremely captivating, dear Lynda. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Enjoyed the words, yes..Night Moves.. thanx/Magnus |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Thank you for the encouraging comments Margherita and Magnus! with smiles... Lynda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wow, the depth of emotion in your poem is amazing. Excellent writing, Gaelynsgirl~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Thank you so much Lori, and you too James, for taking the time to comment. It is really appreciated and motivating. Lynda |
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