Open Poetry #43 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Very late at night When a full moon has risen And an ocean of stars Sparkles above the sea When waves Shush the world To listen for awhile To words spoken long ago It is then again I see your long Hair shimmering The slender figure Of a young woman Dancing along the shore A little autumn chill In the evening air A candle in the window To bring us home . |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Fabulous!! Wish I were walking along that beach with my honey. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Beautiful, Huan. This island boy relates. ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
This is just lovely. Very touching. xxxjanetxx |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
In my opinion, one of your very best, John! [grand impressionism with wonderful images]... serious and long-sustained applause for this fine 'penning'! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
sweat -Juju |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree with Bruce, John. This is one of your best. Very touching. Ida |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
A touching 'tribute to' a special memory. Sometimes we read lines so beautiful, we wish we had written them. There are several in this poem that evoke that thought, but I lay down my selfishness in honour of excellence. so very well done!!! Lynda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Nice write John-- Beautiful descriptions in your poem. ARCTIC WIND |
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Lady Ayla Member
since 2008-07-19
Posts 84WV, United States |
I enjoy poetry that makes a person visualize the scene, and yours does just that. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you I'm glad so many like it. John . |
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