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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2008-07-28 10:14 PM



         

Enchanting Falls

Crystal blue waters fall from mountain peak,
down to a land of mystical beings,
where fairies bathe in it's beauty.
Unicorns drink from the spirit river,
--charming them with it's inner magic.

The great oak trees tell their stories,
and Mother Earth plays with her creations.
--As the enchanting falls sparkles to one's eyes

ARCTIC WIND

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2008-07-28 10:36 PM


Lovely thoughts.  Joyce
Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-07-28 11:53 PM


Beautiful, Arctic Wind.
               Ida

miscellanea
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3 posted 2008-07-28 11:59 PM


Arctic Wind,

   Dancing under the enchanting falls--deliciously appealing!  Inner magic, indeed!
I read this four times, enjoying each sparkling moment!  If you find your poem missing, I have kept in my library!

    Much enjoyed!

          ~miscellanea

XGarapanX
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4 posted 2008-07-29 12:09 PM


What Miscellanea said, lol! I love this. Always did like myths and legends stuff, and faeries especially. Awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

LindsayP
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5 posted 2008-07-29 01:39 AM



Great poem Michael

Much enjoyed

Lindsay

poddarku
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6 posted 2008-07-29 09:37 AM


very imaginative. you have rendered inanimates a voice
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7 posted 2008-07-29 03:13 PM


Wonder-full!

Eric

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8 posted 2008-07-29 04:19 PM


I like to think that there will be a time when I can listen to the Oak tree's stories but meanwhile I can imagine what it will say.  Enjoyed!

Helen

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9 posted 2008-07-30 05:25 AM


Very lovely, AW.
Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-07-30 11:35 AM


Joyce, what a nice surprise that you popped in to read my poem!



Thank you so much

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-07-30 11:36 AM


Marchmadness-

Thank you for finding my poem beautiful!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2008-07-30 11:38 AM


Misc!-- I am so glad that you're keeping it in your library.And I am even extremely happy to know you just even read it.

Thank you for reading it four times lol



ARCTIC WIND

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Garapen-

Thank you for popping in



ARCTIC WIND

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Lindsay-

Thanks



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15 posted 2008-07-30 11:40 AM


poddarku-

Thanks so much!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2008-07-30 11:40 AM


ericc-

Thanks



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Artic Wind
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17 posted 2008-07-30 11:42 AM


HoneyBunch-

I say, close your eyes, and breath in and out. Once your relaxed, picture it, and your there!

Just like that

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

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18 posted 2008-07-30 11:42 AM


Alison-

Why thank you



ARCTIC WIND

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19 posted 2008-07-31 07:33 PM


AW, ALL of your poetry and graphics are enchanting!

Magical!

Loving hug,
EA

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20 posted 2008-07-31 08:31 PM


Short but beautiful. ^^ And I felt that the poem painted a more vivid picture than the painting above it; impressive work. ^^
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Some more fairies for your falls....

enchanting....

Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-08-05 12:27 PM


EA-

Thank you so much!


ARCTIC WIND

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23 posted 2008-08-05 12:28 PM


Veni M-

Thanks



ARCTIC WIND

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24 posted 2008-08-05 12:29 PM


ARH~

Thanks for the fairies, I am sure they will like it there!


ARCTIC WIND

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25 posted 2008-08-05 09:45 PM


Simply enchanting~

Magical smiles~Nancy

Artic Wind
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26 posted 2008-08-05 11:04 PM


Enchantress!

Thank you so much!-- I am so glad that you enjoyed the write.


Thank you for finding it enchanting lol


ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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27 posted 2008-08-06 07:07 PM


Wonderful...James
Artic Wind
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28 posted 2008-08-09 11:15 PM


JamesMichael!

Thanks


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29 posted 2008-08-29 04:46 PM


WOW!!!! I love this one!!!! Thank you for all your comments on my poetry.
vandana
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30 posted 2008-08-30 11:38 AM


good read
TheAnonDavid
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31 posted 2008-08-30 12:28 PM


I was disappointed - not with the poem (which hits just the right note) but with the fact that I thought we were going to be granted a longer conducted round this paradise.
I firmly believe that you CAN have too much of a good thing

Artic Wind
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32 posted 2008-10-14 10:02 PM


Wind Walker!

WOW thank you so much!!!


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Artic Wind
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33 posted 2008-10-14 10:02 PM


Vandanna!

Thanks a lot


ARCTIC WIND

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34 posted 2008-10-14 10:03 PM


TADavid-

Well, it is endless writing about this enchanted land! Release your imagination, and you will find more!


ARCTIC WIND

steavenr
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35 posted 2008-10-16 08:17 PM


such a creative, colorful write...thank you for sharing...
Artic Wind
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36 posted 2008-10-16 10:24 PM


Steavenr-

Thank you so much!!


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Bill Charles
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37 posted 2008-10-17 03:36 PM


Artic Wind - beautiful graphic, great writing. Enjoyed it muchly...

BC

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38 posted 2008-10-21 03:47 PM



Bill Charles!

Thank you so much for replying!!!


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