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Just stop please
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Just stop please |
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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
You can’t make something instantly It takes a year or two Even if you have a life to live I’m afraid of everything I am Everything has changed my life Though I have looked at you before I can’t keep from getting the chills Every time I see your eyes like that I feel like I haven’t tried to impress you I could say I need you Nothing I do will ever let me say that I need to head home with out turning back I didn’t want to leave with out saying bye but I guess it’ll just bring me back You never would leave me forever I thought you were serious on the phone It made me want to come back I thought that I never would believe We’re over before the light could even reach The days where we could laugh and cry This morning had nothing to say Everyday I wake up with a bit of a story No one will hear I’m alone is that ok? The Mary Jane Keeps me alive Even though I thought I was something I would fear I am nothing in my mind I have fallen To every bad thing At the end of the day I couldn’t hold my heart It just slipped away |
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apes531 Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 35 |
hmm this poem is deep.. keep writting (comment and read my poems im new here) |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
This is interesting. I read it and had this impression of channel surfing in one's life. How exerpts come and go, but are not tangibly defined. That's probably not what you intended, but that's where my thoughts went. |
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