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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * * Those words of negativity deposit on her shoulders like adamant particles of dust. More and more energy is needed to shake them off in the very moment when they attempt to cling ... After years of denigration her wings now are encrusted, she can spread them no more. She still remembers though that she was meant to soar ... * * * |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
And hopefully she will, in your next poem, despite the encrustation . . . Lovely characterisation of the picture, Margherita. - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Diana! The picture was found to match the words ... Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
That makes sense! As much as I love the picture, I love the poem more. - Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
but does her mind fly ms.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear D., yes, there is salvation in the power of the mind to detach ... but it can be very hard work at times. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, Oh oh, someone's having a bad day. She'll just have to get over it Hon. Love Bobby |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
There certainly are days like that...a very poignant write. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I love it! How profoundly sad. Makes a dude want to break out his dust buster and go to work! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such a heartfelt write from you, Margherita. A tear jerker to be sure, however I always find some comfort in your poetry. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Margherita, negativity is bad and it has more side effects than direct effects. Wishing her positive energy. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I believe, Margherita. I believe she will again. Just as I did when I was a little girl when I clapped for Tinkerbell, I clap and believe. She will soar again. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: she will soar on new wings I still clap. I still believe I believe. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita - this poem came as a bit of a surprise but it's a true reflection of how we can all feel sometimes. I have recently felt like that myself but when we remember what we were meant to do, we have no option but to get up and get on with the doing. When I was younger I used to spring up but now it takes a little longer perhaps because I think more now than I used to. Oh, for the good old days! Hugs Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all from my heart, my dear Poet friends! Your kindness is felt. A hug to each of you. Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Margherita, that is such a sweet tender poem and I think one of your best, Thanks for sharing it with us. Love Lindsay |
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apes531 Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 35 |
i really liked this poem.. good write (comment and read my poems tell me what you think about my writtings im new here) |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think this is one of your best, Margharita. Just beautiful. Ida |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
This is so touching and heartfelt Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now...this... this was surely meant for me in a certain beautiful way  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you from my heart for your kind and generous comments, my friends. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Heartfelt Write Indeed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
when breath it .. eat it and drink it when its black clouds stands obstacl between us and between Sunshine whitch was shine our faces every morning We do not have to write about anything else because we do not know except it the happiness.. the joy.. the optimism All words become strange as for us vocabularies of language we ignore it maybe we all remember that we know it oneday but taste of our mouth at pronunciation is bitter by it like mouth's taste when we wake after we ate sweets in the morning and forget to wash our hands. this is the sadness ************************ thank you margherita for your subject nourzihane |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
when the sadness enter into ourslves when we breath it .. we eat it and we drink it when its black clouds stands obstacl between us and between Sunshine of the sun whitch was shine our faces every morning We do not have to write about anything else because we do not know except it the happiness.. the joy.. the optimism All words become stranger as for us vocabularies of language we ignore it maybe we all remember that we know it oneday but taste of our mouth at pronunciation is bitter by it like mouth's taste when we wake after we ate sweets in the morning and we forget to wash our teeth this is the sadness ************************ thank you margherita for your subject nourzihane [This message has been edited by nourzihane (07-30-2008 04:14 AM).] |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
I loved this piece so much. Many times I have felt this way and it is not a happy feeling. Can I come and Swiffer off your wings? |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Simply Lovely. Juju -Juju |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Margherita...this was absolutely beautiful and oh so tender and touching in the imagery from your pen...truly enjoyed..and love the picture..but I have always been intrigued with art of ballet....I hope to right one soon as well about this very thing....peaceseaker |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear peaceseaker, for telling me you appreciated this write. It is also a reminder for me today ... to remember that I am meant to soar! Thank you! Looking forward to reading your poems. Love, Margherita |
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