Open Poetry #43 |
Our Family |
WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
“I miss her so much”, She said to me, As tears slipped from her eye, I can’t imagine the Holidays this year, I feel so sad; I can’t help but cry, She loved to give and plan and scheme, For everyone, some special gift, If it took all year, or just a minute, She’d do her best to fulfill your wish, The Holidays would bring her such happiness, Not just in the getting and giving, It was gathering her loved ones close, That was her great joy in living, It’s going to be so hard without her, Christmas just wont be the same, But the greatest gift she ever gave us, Is the family we became. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful and touching , I miss my mother especially at Christmas time Hope |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
I like the ending May your family have a merry Christmas. Mark |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is a beautiful poem thst reminds us all of the someone me miss at Christmas time. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice ending...it touches a part of the heart that's made for missing...thank you for sharing |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am glad that I stopped to read. Thank you for reminding me of what is important. We can never really hear this message too much. Merry Christmas to you and yours. Alison |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Ditto to Alison's remarks WT, she told it well. Have a happy Xmas my friend and keep smiling. Lindsay |
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YoungatHeart2 Member
since 2008-12-12
Posts 81 |
I loved this poem. Thank you for sharing this personal event in your life. Writing about a lost loved one at this time of year helps to deal with the emptiness. YaH |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Thank you all for your kind words. We lost my Mother-in-Law just a few months ago. I have been part of that family for 12 years and I miss her more that expected. My Wife and her sisters are having a really hard time with Christmas. I wrote this to help them remember what their mother gave them. Love to all and rememeber to keep your loved ones close, especially at this time of year. Have a very Merry Christmas Love and poetic wishes to all WT. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I lost my dad in May, and I can't even think about it right now. He was my rock. I'm sorry your wife and her sisters are hurting, missing. Remembering her this way is very sweet.I'm sure one the "girls" will pick up the torch and carry on the gathering |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
touching poem , this woman is beautiful , as you say to give is a joy for the "giver". thanks for the beautiful poem. yann |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Very beautiful poem. I'm sorry for your lose. |
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