Open Poetry #43 |
Fractals of Imagination |
Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Fractals of Imagination I am wrapped around by silence In the darkness of a mind stilled by foes of writ and wordplay and a muse that caters blind. With a fear that reaches soul depth By imagination dressed Day by day, the mind in anguish by this adversary pressed. Beads of sweat upon my forehead track the salt down to my lips with the taste of fear transparent liquid longing in the sips. The circumference of the silence spheres a solitary state in a wilderness of chaos fractalled beauty in the wait. When the first imagination and pure will initiate, the wished for inspiration will the fear expatriate. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Don't know if I read this correctly or not, but to me, this is a poetic tour de force of describing writer's block! :-) Loved it, Indigo |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
You got it in one. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
wow. You guys are crazy smart. My pea brain would have labored far too long to figure this out, lol! But now that I have been given the context, the great writing here even makes sense now. Awesome work! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Thanks G... We write to express who we are and what is important to us, don't we! All of these poems are very personal explorations. It's one of the things I love about this site! I'm glad you liked it. Something doesn't have to be complex to be good, but sometimes if what is inside is complex, that's how it comes out! Lynda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
So much enjoyed Lynda, a great post. Keep up the good work. a big hug Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoy reading poems about writers and writing ~ by writers! lol ~ and you are definitely a very talented one! Thank you for this to be added to my trove of poetic treasures! Sending a warm hug your way (which isn't very far away!) Linda |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Kin, if this is what you do when you have writer's block, goodness knows how high you will fly when your muse lifts you on her wings! Just don't fly so high that you don't come back. We need you in these blue pages! - Owl |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Indeed, I do myself like reading about Writers writing about Writers in a Write! LOL ARCTIC WIND |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Lindsay, Linda, Kin, and A.W. - Thanks guys for taking the time to read, to identify, and to support. It's the inbreath of our poetry. And I do like to keep on breathing! with much affection and appreciation! Lynda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: In the moment you are aware of this, you can start plucking! Great poem! Love, Margherita |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Thank you Margherita... I always love your comments *grin. Lynda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I do enjoy your writing, Lynda. Ida |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Blessings Ida and thank you! |
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