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The Great Puppeteer (From Poetry Workshop)
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The Great Puppeteer (From Poetry Workshop) |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India 
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My humble thanks to Balladeer Sir for coming up such a interesting challenge in the Poetry Workshop. This world is a stage, Age is just another phase, Ways and roles we play, Clay puppets we are in plays. Someone is a great Dad, Sad someone is an orphan son, One is a caring mother, Other is friend like none. Strings tied to our soul, Role and goal set for us, Thus, we play our part, Depart when he wants us. Prasad.N "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 This is a wonderfully creative response to Balladeer's 'puppeteer' challenge, Prasad! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Prasad, This is wonderful and I am very impressed. I have been struggling with this challenge forever (or so it feels like). Congratulations on a job well done. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am impressed too, dear Prasad. This is fine work! I went to see Balladeer's instructions to know what it was all about, even though I noticed the unusual rhyming at the end and at the beginning of the lines. Excellent! Love, Margherita  |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Hmm... not sure what the challenge entailed but the poem is awesome. Great work! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Midnitesun, thank you so much for the applause and the wonderful comments. Prasad  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Alison, I am so happy to read your comments, hoping you read your poem on this challenge soon, all the best to you. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Dear Margherita, yes, I spent quite a few hours reading and understanding the instructions, this the first time I tried a challenge like this one and I am feeling very happy it turned out well. Thank you so much for your comments. Really appreciate it. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Garapan, thanks for the compliment. Prasad  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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