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Just give me one chance
| Open Poetry #43 |
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Just give me one chance |
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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
What is the world to you? I want to help you keep it safe Ill do it at any cost to make sure it won’t stop I want to fly with you I want to find you I want to hear your heart rush Keep walking in different paths Move to where you feel like it will last Don’t feel like you have to surrender I want to make you feel the same I want to feel like a lucky man I want to show you everything I am Can I talk to you about anything? Or do you want me to just turn away? All I want to say is I won’t let you down What’s your name? Why can’t I learn I don’t have much to hide from you Would you tell me everything? Last night I was dreaming of you But you left me out on an old porch Now I’m closing out the last time I saw you And I can’t turn back I wish I could find you Ill spend everything I got on you You’ve never left my head I keep hoping you’re back So I can see you one last time Please god let her be coming back |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Enjoyed this piece. From a woman's point of view I thought it was very warm and loving. Keep up the good work. |
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