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Open Poetry #43
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Inspired-8
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Pluto
0 posted 2008-12-27 12:51 PM


Winds so whispers
Of silent things
Subtle gestures
Calm may bring
Distant thunders
Fade to dim
Blue skies plunder
Clouds soft white skin
To the horizon’s
Robust sun
Gallant rising
A new days' come

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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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1 posted 2008-12-27 04:18 AM

I like the short simple poems they are always so subtle i like this one it's very good
Well penned
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2008-12-27 06:14 AM

I agree with Annie this is a nice simple but well presented write which makes the reader create such images to fill in the wonder of the day.

Take care

Eric

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