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Metaphorically Blonde
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Metaphorically Blonde |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Metaphorically Blonde Captivated, the sun turned to face the moon One tea, one coffee poured Combining into full cups of twilight Pure light, returned in the face of fire Shared the same skies, the same days Tripped into universal proclivity, Each with full cheeks, swallowed by thin face The obvious giggled back, clumsily in clouds Ah, the fool most innocent recovered his destiny And she repeated the joke until the burst of providence Stars fell, their combined tears They laughed, until they cried Copyright Kkh 7/23/08 |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
What a delightful metaphoric romp! A well written combo piece of whimsy and romance. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Romped. Yes. THat's the word. I got romped by this, lol! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This first line, and it's a rather ordinary image for me (I have it all over my home) "Captivated, the sun turned to face the moon" well, it got my attention, but I was actually captivated by the second: "one tea, one coffee, poured" sighing content-edly? *grin* methinks you understand a bit about ceremony and magick... I am ever your fan, and does gray count for blonde?  Because I yam, yanno. (I'll leave that open for split hairs.)  Love to you Kath! |
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