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Open Poetry #43

I Say Goodbye

Anna Lyzing
Junior Member

since 2008-12-24

Posts 11
Sugar plums dance, Dreamland

0 posted 2008-12-24 12:13 PM

On this crystal Christmas Eve,
snow begins falling on my sleeve.
Trees glistening, bowing toward ground,
bunny hops by without a sound.

Wind blowing, gathering drifts,
here come plows beginning their shifts.
Virgin footprints laced in snow,
greets shivering, concrete below.

Bench in honor of my rest,
stood test of time for me the best.
As this blanket of snow falls,
I say goodbye, as my heart stalls.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-12-24 03:30 PM

Welcome to PiP and thank you for sharing your poetry with us.

Merry Christmas.

Alison

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-12-24 04:02 PM

Nice! welcome to pipsterland

oh, and stick around awhile please? I enjoyed your first post!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2008-12-24 06:13 PM

welcome to pip look foward to you next post

Anna Lyzing
Junior Member

since 2008-12-24

Posts 11
Sugar plums dance, Dreamland

4 posted 2008-12-25 09:25 AM

Thank you all for the welcomes, and Merry Christmas.

I thought with this poem even the homeless need remembering during the holidays, and sometimes extreme situations do happen, and it is kind of sad.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

5 posted 2008-12-25 04:23 PM

Welcome...and this is beautiful and sad...kat

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2008-12-26 10:45 PM

Anna Lyzing - waiting to read more of your writings. Hope you had a Merry Christmas...

BC

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