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Open Poetry #43
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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
0 posted 2008-12-24 04:04 AM


I declare
I don’t love I
I love you
I don’t trust I,

I don’t think I
but I being “I”
how can I accept
what I think

without being “You”
© Copyright 2008 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-12-27 09:26 AM

Wonderful declaration, dear Yann!

The awareness of being One is a major discovery on our journey.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)
sarah 45
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since 2008-12-19
Posts 54
2 posted 2008-12-28 03:54 PM

gotta agree with Margherita, nice declaration.   I'm sure alot of people would like 2 hear 1 of its kind.....yeh and thanks 4 reading ma 1st poem...  T.C
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