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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-12-23 03:35 PM



kote doses of hungry vanilla
unbrella without the canvas
and you have the rain reins

there are places in my eyes
where you wear your boots down
someone else's stairways silent

but with the wondering in your eyes
about why the mirrors lie often
about mexico and those other places

just out of our reaching fingers
when we have said our prayers out loud
for each other to hear on occasion

godless we still linger in the worship


___________

daark

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1 posted 2008-12-23 04:47 PM


"there are places in my eyes"

D. I LOVE that line. madly

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-12-24 06:23 AM


ms suesea, thank you babe...
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3 posted 2008-12-27 01:51 AM


Conversion never sounded so enticing.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-12-27 06:15 AM


yes ... love this Mr Daark xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ethome
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5 posted 2008-12-27 06:27 AM


This really stimulates the imagination of the reader.

cohiba must look good on her all the same.............

If all else fails you can use this for the start of a country song...
"where you wear your boots down
someone else's stairways silent"

I'm betting you naver considered that angle...............

Don't mind me 'I'm just an open hearted fool.'

God! now there's a title for a country song......Sheesh before you know it I'll be converted too......LOL!

Take care

Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-12-27 06:49 AM


ms ali-san,thanks babe

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ms r&b, thanks lady friend


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eric, thanks amigo..she is sure not country, but I could see that fit.

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