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Earth's Breath
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Earth's Breath |
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Newpoet Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 72 |
Shamrock pastures gleaming in the sun, Relax on the grass, while little sister runs, Trees crowd around the edges of terrain, Leaves drip from yesterday’s morning rain, Beyond the land, mountains sour in the sky, She lays on the blanket and closes her eyes, Clouds float above rigid mountainous escapes, Earthly skyscrapers are now distant shapes There’s an unknown spirituality in these lands. I might always seek it, but I’ll never understand. |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
A fine, evocative piece of writing  Mark |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NewPoet~ Your couplets are full of expressions of beauty~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is very well done, with vivid imagery one can reach out and touch. |
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WolfHeart Junior Member
since 2008-12-17
Posts 23Oregon, USA |
Very vivid imagery that is like a lullaby. Sweet thoughts float from the words into the heart and add beauty to the world. "Love the unloveable; they need it most of all." |
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