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Reviewing Revelations
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Reviewing Revelations |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Disaster spawns behaviorals disqualifying dominant smug superiority and definition's exponents find the "if" in life and note I stole that from Apocalypse as Now is all that is "end quote" Define each other? Yet we miss the mark (continue) confidant blinded by sincerity we merely spout what we perceive translating love and life and grief dismissal of "reality" defying most uncomfortably all that we cannot retrieve or equate to balancing algebraic pumps that beat in time to songs illogically-- your "e" made for a bad emcee, but love is not competitive nor title of Miss Uni-verse (a one-note song is merely curse) I regret I've written worse as guilty as they come, my songs in adequate (and much too long) Solutions somewhat elegant but eloquently wrong. * * * Edited: lmao..I added an I to my "reality"--somebody page Dr. Freud!  Thanks, friend! [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (07-23-2008 11:48 PM).] |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
(((Serenity))) I am always amazed by you. You always make me swirl...like a dust devil. I'm not sure what that means...but I love the feeling. I love you for always giving me that feeling...regardless of what it means. ::smiles:: |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
One of these days, you and I will get together and sing a new song. (I play the washboard.) *chuckle*  thank you lovie |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
You are amazing. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Solutions somewhat elegant but eloquently wrong." Ha, right? Yeah, you defeated me again! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i dont understand any of this but it reads so delightful! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Me too! Don't understand it, but loved trying to! Hugs - Owl |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write Serenity!  ARCTIC WIND |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This one was...deliberately ambiguous.  In it, I alluded to several movies which served as hints, so I wouldn't call this poetry per se, more like a bit of a tease, with "madness" as its central theme. Three of the more obvious clues are "Apocalypse Now", "A Beautiful Mind" and not a movie, but the title is of course, reference to the most mystifying read--The Book of Revelations. Whatever conclusions you draw from that, if any, is entirely up to you.  I thank you all for taking the "spin" with me. Sometimes I just like to have a bit of fun.  Love to all! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I have came back for another read of this!   ARCTIC WIND |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah Larry got it just right there |
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