Open Poetry #43 |
Lies |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Lie to me. The faith of memory waivers in your absence. Tell me that you're near and space falls to thought alone. Whisper to me distance and false beliefs of separation. Then whisper to me something endless...until your breath passing warm against me - Is the only truth I know. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This belongs up top. (Karen bites her fingers, trying to resist the temptation of the double entendre...) She lost. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
*bites karens fingers, too* Yes, it does. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
it reads profound until the surrender to love....i took that to mean how love shouldn't be a logical cost-benefit analysis |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Wow, Eric, you've done it again! You tap into what should be and then write it. Thank you. Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... and it becomes the truth of both in one single yet eternal moment, never to be undone ... Wonderful, dear Eric. Margherita |
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