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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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How gloriously the future is unfolding in golden hues of longing. How gracefully the wounds are healing unravelling like solemn morning blooms, dripping with psychic dew. Hands are folding, weaving like fire a touch, an embrace, a reality untouched by humanity. ..And I must tell you every little thing, complicated by the smiles of the day, oh, how touching, your tears like mists around the mountains, forming so tenderly in such a way, that only water would envy those instincts, those emotions so ever-flowing in the scenery. Forgiveness, the bruise of our time, the stain on our sheets, where we sleep, dreaming of our summer burden, our gained years, our creases in the wind. The scent of her perfume, the pain of your inflictions, so mesmorizing in my skin. How whimsically your touch of guilt envelopes me, the time, the seclusion, the scar upon your lonesome soul will never disappear. I will still be here. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have been missed, sweet one.  I'll be here too, tomorrow. (I assume--grin?) But this must be savored, and it's a yum-good note to tuck me into bed, too!  |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Tremendous! The ending is absolutely fantastic, the whole thing flowed and felt very beautiful. Archivin'. This is my kind of stuff "How do the angels get to sleep, when the devil leaves the porchlight on?" -- Tom Waits, 'Mr. Siegal' |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I don't think I have met you before, Kaoru but you write lovely poetry. Ida |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
How awesome is this piece? I like the way you write! Great poem, and I look forward to more of them. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Meghan, your words have been missed. Hoping all is well in your life.  M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"the wounds are healing unraveling like solemn morning blooms, dripping with psychic dew." WOW! It is so great to read your creative imagery again, Meghan. Hope the little one is doing well, and you are enjoying all that life offers.  |
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Musel Junior Member
since 2008-07-17
Posts 34 |
amazing poem,, by far the best i have read all day... it was inspiring to say the least.. I look forward to reading more... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Powerful! Good to see you are back. Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
So lovely to see you and your exquisite poetry back again. - Owl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Meghan when I saw your reply to my poem I nearly went to tears I'm so glad you are back! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
loved the psychic dew and nothing typical about your expression of this most passionate and angst filled poem |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"the wounds are healing unravelling like solemn morning blooms," Nod. Paint me green. I want your eyes, to see things in such a beautifully positive way! YOU...are lovely. But I'm willing to guess you've heard that before, huh?  Elfin Magick! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Forgiveness, the bruise of our time, the stain on our sheets, where we sleep, dreaming of our summer burden, our gained years, our creases in the wind. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Gaaawd Kaoru, this is stunning, absolutely glorious poetry. Yes, forgiveness is a powerful emotion and there's so much to be said for the feeling, the cause and effect, and the scars that run deep. |
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