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Open Poetry #43
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2008-12-19 05:58 PM

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A man
As hopeful
As his son
Is happy

But since
It’s all
A mystery

Their monkey
Never bothers
Why


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-12-19 06:04 PM

John,

Hopeful and happy go well together.

Nice carving on this poem.

Bobby
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-12-19 10:28 PM

It all stays the same anyway.
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