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Pestillence
Junior Member
since 2008-09-03
Posts 25
England

0 posted 2008-12-19 08:20 AM



The Swan's Path

Adrift on a crystal lake,
Far from the maddening shore,
At peace and calm with myself,
Far from all that I were.

This is the path that I chose,
To walk and sail all alone,
Away from the life I loved,
Away from a world cold as stone.

I had the close ties sharing their warmth,
I had the crowd that beckoned me in,
I had the wealth to buy all I needed,
I had a choice of women all for my sin.

I drifted through the days without control,
Never taking the fall for my move,
Passing the buck onto another lost soul,
Destroying the evidence so they cannot prove

Who really caused the downfall of the business,
Who was to blame when it went south,
Who caused them to go from rich to beggar,
Who took the food from their mouth.

While they all chanted my name with hate,
I slipped the candy into my coffee,
Energy surged then drained in a second,
Ten minutes later I was free.

They might find something where I fell,
It is a time that I shall not see,
I'll laugh on the wind as they curse out loud,
Desperately hoping they'll one day find me.

But to do so they have to look to the crystal lake,
Go beyond the anger, malice and wrath,
If they truly hope to find my lost soul,
They need to take the swan's path.

© Copyright 2008 James - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2008-12-19 10:28 AM


I drifted through the days without control,
Never taking the fall for my move,
Passing the buck onto another lost soul,
Destroying the evidence so they cannot prove


Sounds a lot like when I was over drinking.
Like the mellow ending of this piece.

Green grass and blue skies to ya!

Eric

Marc-Andre
Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501

2 posted 2008-12-19 12:39 PM


Nice imagery! I look forward to reading your next post. Mark
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-12-19 07:10 PM


Interesting. I guess there's a long line of people who could have written this one these days.
         Ida


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