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after morgan but before leggoland |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I guess it was walking behind you in your long leather and watching your hips flirt softly as you went to the rental car and stopped to look at some paper they had put on your window perhaps you were afraid it told more about the person of you than you were ready to show me but it was nothing really so you looked back and saw me looking and you smiled like everything was ok with a question mark expression and then we did lunch in a hotel with a thousand places we could be lovers but we went to rincon instead and were teenagers for a moment just basking in the wanting to and then you drove me back to town you were crazy sounds in your throat and you touched my lips too with your fingers that I had watched as you pointed at special places you wanted me to see up close sometimes and now you read this and smile a tear ______________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my Mr Daark... you do visit some wonderful places... lovely love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
and then you drove me back to town you were crazy sounds in your throat and you touched my lips too with your fingers that I had watched as you pointed at special places you wanted me to see up close sometimes and now you read this and smile a tear Achingly melancholic. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and now you read this and smile a tear... extremely poignant... one of the ways I like to read you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms r/b thank you pretty lady from underland __________ Ms mar thank you babe for your soft sounds ____________ Ms sun thank you lady friend for knowing this side of my coin |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Whats rincon? we dont have that here. I like the story this tells. Thanks Jan.x |
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aZMERE bOHEMIAN nOMAD Junior Member
since 2008-07-07
Posts 20I live in the uk but dreaming of a place across the channel |
"The Private Memoirs Of A Dark Stranger" (Hmmmm less of a stranger as we read on). "Next page please"  |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
it is the wanting, fragile in the mind's back seat of soft leather smiles. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jan...rincon is a beach over in ventura...it was hot during the surf day 60's and 70's...still is pretty hot for waves today..it is also a place of memory for some...the pacific there seems to be a seam between yesterday and tomorrow. thanks ms _______________ Azmere...thanks my friend..am sure a few more will ooze from the pages.. __________________ ms indi, glad to see your eyes and feel your notes on my guitar..thanks for reaching |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yea, this made me smile...like a magic swoon, you have a way of getting under a womans skin. But, I'm fresh out of tears, for now! This was special, just like the memories you write of, I've got a truckload of em, and they're all mine!! Hugs and lovies, Mosey Man~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy...thanks babe... |
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