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Rick
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0 posted 2008-12-17 06:32 AM



With smile adjusted for the day
The need for sleep now left for night
Again I do repeat my way
And greet again the morning light

The difference change is hard to see
But older with those hours gone
Life’s habit walks again with me
Into a day I now belong

© Copyright 2008 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2008-12-17 08:39 AM


enjoyed the vision Rick!!
Juju
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2 posted 2008-12-17 10:52 AM


Habits.. (:

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2008-12-17 06:16 PM


Rick - sleep, wonder if it's really to age gracefully, or not...

BC

LindsayP
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4 posted 2008-12-17 08:09 PM




Again I do repeat my way
And greet again the morning light

I do so hope that you will be able to greet
the morning light for many many years to come my friend. great post Rick, enjoyed.
Take care.

Lindsay

Rick
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5 posted 2008-12-18 01:58 AM


Hi Bill, so many questions in this lifetime, few of us know any of the answers, we survive on habit while wishing for everything.

Hi Lindsay mate, I hope I meet a few more mornings as well, words come to the mind and it is so nice to share them with friends of mine.

Take care you both and enjoy your writing.

Rick

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6 posted 2008-12-26 09:02 PM


Rick,

Nicely said, my friend.

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2008-12-26 09:26 PM


just wonderful Rick!   RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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