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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2008-12-16 05:44 AM

Wrap me in your sweet caress
show me the hidden tenderness
that lies within a heart of gold
a story remains, yet untold.

Melt me in    desires    blush of sin
hear loves rhapsody play again
meet me at the edge of our dreams
where rays of love brightly gleam.

In beat of time,       two hearts unite
in precious union        of spirit delights,
one breath     one moment     frozen in time
touching of souls in loves light, divine.

This kiss of passions bliss,    I await
While praying us to be   favored…..by fate.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-12-16 07:28 AM

It's so nice to find you here today with this beautiful and romantic write, dear Donna!

We should re-elaborate the concept of sin! ... blushing

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2008-12-16 11:31 AM

"Melt me in desires blush of sin
hear loves rhapsody play again
meet me at the edge of our dreams"

loved this

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2008-12-16 02:33 PM

The only way to look at life ...
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one breath one moment frozen in time
touching of souls in loves light, divine
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because we never know if we are going to get the next one. Nice thoughts in this

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-12-16 10:45 PM

I love words...I love your exquisite ending, but I also loved your style...nice write...a lot there...really, really good

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2008-12-17 06:21 PM

Donna - really liked the words in this writing. It reaches out from within...

BC

WolfHeart
Junior Member

since 2008-12-17

Posts 23
Oregon, USA

6 posted 2008-12-17 07:32 PM

Just luscious - very romantic and very open. You did this subject justice.

"Love the unloveable; they need it most of all."

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2008-12-23 02:44 PM

This warms a winter afternoon beautifully! *S*

YoungatHeart2
Member

since 2008-12-12

Posts 81

8 posted 2008-12-23 05:13 PM

In beat of time,       two hearts unite
in precious union        of spirit delights,
one breath     one moment     frozen in time
touching of souls in loves light, divine.

OUTSTANDING....so very romantic.....mmmmm.....to dream......

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

9 posted 2008-12-24 10:30 AM

very passionate piece.....got mistle-toe?

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2008-12-24 10:38 AM

You all smile me my friends....
huge hugs!!!!!!!!! And Happy Holidays to all. Peace ~D

Hey Toe?? C'MERE...

muwahhhhhhhhhh

Merry Christmas Toe!!

"In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things."
-Barbara Ann Kipfer

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