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Recesses Of My Mind |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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 [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (12-15-2008 02:07 PM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful write, but I found it very difficult to read...font was so small...thank you for sharing |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Normally, when I find a font difficult to read, I can highlight it, but unfortuntely, although beautifully presented, I too found it difficult to read. (And I found my glasses--on my head.)  But it was well worth the effort--the second stanza was especially compelling. Beautifully serene.  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is nice work. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
steavenr - thank you for stopping by, and letting me know about the font. Think I fixed it... serenity blaze - appreciate the comments, think I was able to fix the font so it's readable... Bobby - thanks for the comment, it's appreciated... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sounds so lovely and peaceful, Bill  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bill, this is simply enchanting, one of my favorite of yours! And the presentation as always is a treat too. Font ok now! Perfect! Love, Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very soft and serene, and with a lovely picture. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is indeed a very beautiful poem, Bill! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great poem Bill and the font is quite good over here. Have a great day my friend. Lindsay |
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Sharon Rose Member
since 2008-11-03
Posts 51 |
Bill, You have a beautiful spirt and it shows in your poetry. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I wanted to stop by again and say thank you for helping the vision impaired among us...love the whole write, but that last line was spectacular...beautiful write, simply & exquisitely beautiful |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Very nicely done. I have read it three times and I can imagine the beauty with the sun beating down and the cool breeze. I can even hear the birds singing their melody. Ariana |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - I love looking at the graphic, as it seems very relaxing. Thanks for the reply... Margherita - I'm glad you like this one, still learning on the presentations, but getting there... Midnightsun - thank you for coming by... vandana - happy you like the write... Sue - thank you for the kind words, I try... LindsayP - thank you my friend for stopping by for a read... Sharon Rose - My dear one, thank you for expressing your thoughts about my writings... steavenr - thank you for stopping by for another read. I had a little trouble posting this one but it seems now to be readable. Glad you liked this one... Ariana - haven't seen you here in a long time. Your kind words are telling me that this write did what it was meant to do, and that is to take the reader into the poem. Thanks again... BC |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
If one could find a place like this and carry it with you for eternity, nice verse. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well written piece Billy Boy....and to hell with the font...when you get our age we can't read it anyhow...right?.....Have a Merry Christmas my old friend... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great stuff Bill! Loved it! Eric |
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Anna Lyzing Junior Member
since 2008-12-24
Posts 11Sugar plums dance, Dreamland |
very beautiful |
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