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Agoraphobic |
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rmorrow11 New Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 3 |
Baby, I'm sorry, I've been trapped in a horrific time warp. Thought I'd tell since this feeling is foriegn, and isn't so sweet. Today I left My zone and prohibitions at my place, and the world has altered. Fields used to graze now are crawling with awarness and alteration. exasperated in an unfamiliar situation, I'm reflecting things that have come and gone. I locked the door, threw away the key and developed my very own atmosphere Diagnosing this condition will only tire. I'm feeling ready, don't care how long it takes. I'm breaking free, cutting loose and beating this life scandal lifeless. The corner store we use to get cigs no longer has a road leading to it. The house where I last felt free from care is no longer in sight, only a four lane highway because everyone wants to get "there" in a hurry. Driving from work, drove the long way home and noticed a town previously uncharted in my mind. there i saw children play, a school with full grown trees, and yet another mini mall.. And where Mikey Crashed his car, I see a small white cross off in sight where the road use to lie. This little grocery store has gone corporate U.S. Everything they feel needed improvement is turning into a middle American mess. Yet I still breathe the same air, only in a different light. I still have feelings, but choose less weight.. |
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Danny Cobb Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 74 |
this sad, relfective, and troubling, mulling over past and present and discerning the impact of loss. Very Good! Danny |
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