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rmorrow11 New Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 3 |
This match feels almost burnt, let it not be for only a reason.... I've been inspired to write but only for a limited rhyme.... Could you be my salvation?, I'll be you're stand still in time... Struck by those stary browns, does the story end before I begin to begin??? I'm wearing feelings on a sleeve, sounding like a broken record," darlin' come stay here with me"........ Sinking like a rock, faster and faster, sure to swell to a fold out.... Didn't take me so long to complicate, but what matters seems forgotten.... Like the reasons for the seasons I'm sure to solitaire for a lifetime.... No matter how many sorry's and temptations, like clockwork I will Surely swallow some pride.... In complete honesty is lying a sin, consider me damned, damned to be veracious, to be discredited, to be renounced...... This is all lost in a firewall, between a bunch of ones and zeros 110010100, desperately asking for viral infections.... For once I'm not so insensitive, not so egocentric, not so,,,,,, me..... Tearing from my fingers, will you listen to my six string sadness, listen between the chords, hearing all intentions and actions are sincere.... So here I am, another song in the books, another candy coated line, washing clean from old heartache and lies..... Here I am, All brand new,I've cleaned up well, coming soon, to a theatre near you...... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Could you be my salvation?, I'll be you're stand still in time... Struck by those stary browns, does the story end before I begin to begin??? I'm wearing feelings on a sleeve, sounding like a broken record," darlin' come stay here with me"........" loved that part...such a cool write  welcome to pip! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Welcome to Pip, Wow, a lot here, images emotion and the power of a naked soul, very powerful write, honest and in your face... this I like I look forward to reading more, thank you. Reagards, OLIAS. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really enjoyed this...again wonderful! |
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