Hypothermic Recollections.

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Open Poetry #43

Hypothermic Recollections.

PrestonThePoet
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 87

0 posted 2008-12-15 12:11 PM

Hypothermia setting in,
My mind starts to crawl away.
Inching its way towards the end;
Past seas of mistakes.
Around mountains of accomplishments;
Down the highways of life.
Nothing in sight,
But white terror.
My eyes begin to strain.
Urging my body to live,
I feel my heart pulse,
Each beat a sign of hope.
A prayer in disguise,
Craving to be heard.
Running blood,
I’d thought had frozen
With one last pump,
Overcome by the cold.
My hope;
Has frozen.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2008-12-15 05:45 PM

"My hope;
Has frozen"

I know the feeling

M

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2008-12-15 08:15 PM

PrestonThePoet - strong words in this write, nicely done...

BC

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