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Gunslinger
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2008-12-14 08:42 PM



It’s raining while I’m driving-
And I have to fight the sleep…
From all the late night miles I push
My old, road-weary heap.

I bought her new, six years ago-
But, Lord, she shows the strain…
And like my skills at rodeo,
She’ll never “shine” again.

I used to be a “good one”-
At least that’s what they say-
Headed for the Finals-
I made the ponies pay.

I’m not sure how it started-
Maybe I was getting’  old…
I got banged up a time or two-
My saddle got real cold.

I tell myself each mornin’
You’ll get it back again-
But I really can’t remember-
Just what it’s like to win.

© Copyright 2008 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-12-14 08:51 PM


Yo Gunslinger,

You're doing okay.  Hang in there bro.

Bobby

YoungatHeart2
Member
since 2008-12-12
Posts 81

2 posted 2008-12-14 09:11 PM


Change is a good thing. You will find something new in which you can win.
Nice analogy.

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