Open Poetry #43 |
Winter Night |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Winter Night With frozen clouds falling from the frigid deep-December sky, (to shatter on these ancient Hills) as snowflakes whirl-dance in the whistling winter wind and gathering moonlight shadows, all conflicting emotions of the day surrender to this crystal night in effortless enlightenment. ---b. e. adams (12/14/08) |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Evocative, brings me images that actually make me miss winter. Mark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I just wish it would snow enough to be able to enjoy it. M |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
splendid Bruce, very evocative of emotionnal surrender to nature. yann |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"snowflakes whirl-dance in the whistling winter wind" ...magnificent |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - it has snowed here and right now a winter wonderland, nice write... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, We haven't had any snow in Philadelphia yet. The neighborhoods ready for it though. Nice poem about snow and stuff. Bobby |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Light with grace and beauty and heavy with emotion, Bruce. I especially love the last 3 lines. - Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm ready to see the white stuff and not just sleet. Liked that ending. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Beautifully written. Patricia |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Bruce...I felt surrender in your words allowing you to appreciate the beauty of winter. Lovely! |
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