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L.L.Y.N.B.H <3
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since 2008-12-07
Posts 4
AZ

0 posted 2008-12-14 03:30 AM


I see your face...
It hurts.
I see your eyes look into mine...
It hurts...
I'm afraid to hear your heartbeat...
It might hurt
Your words touch my soul...
Surprise? No,it still hurts.
Your smile leaves me breathless...
That hurts.
Imagine a kiss...
That could hurt.
Knowing you will never be mine...
... Hurts.
The only thing that doesnt cause me pain,
Is knowing it's me you'll never intentionally hurt.
Knowing i won't be on your list. It wont be my name.

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-12-14 06:54 AM


You hurt, but your consciousness lifts you out of further damage.

You have done well with this one.

Welcome to Pip, Danielle.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

xsaamaanthaax
Junior Member
since 2008-11-28
Posts 21
USA, Arizona.
2 posted 2008-12-15 03:18 PM


Very nice poem... Love you babe!
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