Open Poetry #43 |
Bones Loses Hope |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones is sitting at home watching T.V., while Mom and the new man are raising hell. All the kids on T.V. are having fun. They’re all eating well, and getting nice Christmas gifts from Santa Claus. Bones never got a birthday gift or a Christmas gift ever, and he knows he’s not eating well. Bones lost hope a long time ago, about being a regular American kid. Bones is five years old. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, dear Bobby, those lucky children on tv used for example to advertise designer's clothes, make my heart go out to all the "non regular" children of this Earth, who, like Bones, don't have enough to eat and never receive a gift ... It's good that there are lucky children, it's their birthright, but we can't tolerate the enormous gap between those who have too much and those who have not enough. May humanity be able to change things! Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, I have faith that humanity is working on it. Thanks for your thoughtful reply. Love Bobby |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there is so much sadness in this...to think that someone could get like that in 5 short years...it hurts to read, harder to come to grips with the truth of it... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Steavenr, For your kind concern, and words for Bones. I'm afraid Bones grew up a little too fast. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yeah, Bobby, TV could be pretty rough on the "have nots" of the world. ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, What you say is very true. Love Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Yo Bobby, this is a sad story and I guess Bones becane adult earlier with his thoughts and experiences...enjoyable to read. yann |
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OldPalOldBuddy New Member
since 2008-12-13
Posts 7 |
What a sad piece of writing but a powerful message. I work with children this age and some of them grow up very fast but not by their choice. Amazing how the smallest kind gesture is greatly appreciated by these kids. They take nothing for granted. As I listen and watch the ones who have everything whine and pout when they don't get what they want, my heart aches for the ones who have nothing. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
So sad. What makes it more sad is the tickle me elmo doll incident. We are greedy creatures. -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, Yes, you're right about Bones growing up early. That sometimes happens here in the land of the free, and the home of the brave. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks OldPalOldBuddy, You've hit the nail on the head. Thanks for your thoughtful comment. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juli, I wasn't aware of something happening to Elmo. I'm afraid that one slipped by my radar. Love Bobby |
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