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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-12-11 06:14 PM

   Transience (IV)

Trailing sunset,
shadow-apparitions
waver in the twilight
  mountain mist...

By a ruined
  temple,
a fallen bell
lies broken
in the snow...

echoes in time

       --- b. e. adams (12/11/2008)
© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-12-11 06:45 PM

fallen bells echo sadness
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-12-11 08:34 PM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

"Transience IV is a good addition to the series.

Bobby
steavenr
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3 posted 2008-12-11 08:37 PM

nice imagery (especially of a broken bell that echoes in the snow) excellent write
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