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Sweet Strawberries |
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Ian.Bar New Member
since 2008-12-08
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Women walking, On delirious sidewalks, Summer breeze patting her hair softly, Autumn, without shedding’ Cloud, passes in the sky above, With your lips, sweet strawberries, You kissed to my, desert lips, You’re saying goodbye, In a place, It is so dark, Light, So tiny, Dazzling the pupilla, it’s velvet, I’d stepped over the sign, In to the incomprehensible space, It is quietness horizon now, You are gazing at others eyes, And I was looking, at your lips, I know, now, that I’d, Observing, deeply in to your eyes, I’ve wanted to say, but I wasn’t yet, Bleeding, on the bed, Now I’m starting to see, “Time”, said wise man, “Makes people see things in a different way”, How is it already happened?, Now you are so faraway, Or closely then ever, It is a peaceful horizon now, So, how you always rising up?, It was only the breeze that blew at her hair. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
nice introduction welcome to pip |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting intro on this write...this write is almost like being inside your mind as memories formulate...excellent format for the content welcome to PiP...will be looking for more along the way |
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