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| Open Poetry #43 |
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Attic Antique |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Beside A steamer trunk My parents Somehow brought From Europe Wooden eaves Among dusty Spider webs Watching colors— Through a Lambent window The new world’s Forth of July . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (12-09-2008 08:25 PM).] |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Succinct write vivid imagery leaves much to ponder much enjoyed... vic |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sounds like your attic is a whole lot more inviting than mine! Lambent.....I had forgotten that word, and it's beautifully right for this....so I've got a literal gain, on top of the enjoyment. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
cool write...I, too, had to look up 'lambent'...it is a perfect word choice for your imagery love the last line and all the connotations it portrays |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks all This is a memory from when I was seven brought back by Ed's poem Thanks again John |
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