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Open Poetry #43

No I'm Not Immortal

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-12-06 11:42 PM

No I'm Not Immortal

You know that I love you
so please allow me to
continue to love you
within the pleasure of today,
in future days of coming months,
even for a lifetime.
No I'm not immortal
but surely love is...

JamesLee
05December
2008

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2008-12-07 01:38 AM

Enjoyed...your gal is so lucky to have such a romantic guy like you!...kat

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

2 posted 2008-12-07 01:38 AM

Sigh...yes thats as it should be...love immortal

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-12-07 03:50 AM

JamesLee, love vibrations that last forever, isn't that just a wonderful truth to cling to?! Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2008-12-07 02:05 PM

The essence of pure romanticism!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2008-12-07 02:18 PM

i hope it is

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2008-12-07 02:25 PM

This is a gem...Enjoy your poetry.

yann

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2008-12-11 12:26 PM

Very powerful poem in its simplicity, James.

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