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Reflections Against A Pond
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Reflections Against A Pond |
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SpheresOvIce New Member
since 2008-12-04
Posts 7 |
“Reflections Against A Pond” Winter, Embrace. Winter, Take. Winter, Describe. Winter, Alive. O Winter day, Tell me of your wish, So Cold and Dry, Please winter night, Rescue the dream, A night so clear and so fogged, The Winter scent, Liberate me of my thoughts, O Winter, Hide yourself from sunrise., O winter dreary, Embrace me.. O winter please, Transgress me through the blizzards, O winter day, Rescue my lonely soul, Carry me through to times of lore, O winter Night raise me from the dead, O, winter frequent, Guide me to the tranquil, O winter moon, Whistle in my ear, O winter day Take me away. O winter spell, Whisper the secrets, Share with me all you know, Winter please, Enlighten my thoughts, Stir my soul, Winter project, A picture of yourself onto me, O winter why, Can I not see your face, O winter I beg, Describe. O winter my love, With you I feel death inside, O winter my dream, With you much can be done, Winter snow fall to my side, Snowflakes dancing against the winds, O winter I tell you, Winter frequent, I am so alive. So Winter, Take my soul, So Winter, Have my mind, So winter, Grab my face, So winter, I see you in the glass, So winter, I am your face, So winter, May I describe, A winter, Where Spring Never Arrives. Ray, December 4th, 2008 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Pips! Yes, winter is definitely here, biting faces fingers and toes. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Transgress me through the blizzards" ...and interesting, yet power-soaked, line in an eloquent write oh, and welcome to PiP |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Very good, I even felt the chill of the cold icy day. "late" |
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SpheresOvIce New Member
since 2008-12-04
Posts 7 |
Thank you all whom have taken the time to look at my soul! I appreciate the welcome and kind words of encouragement. Ray, |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I believe you have captured the essence of winter here...both that of the soul and of the weather. Welcome!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome to pip |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yes, winter is a living, breathing force of life, isn't she. Thank you for sharing this and welcome to PiP, Ray. Alison |
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